The parts of the letter

(a) The heading. This has already been mentioned. Note that this ex­ample contains all the information men­tioned in the first paragraph of this chapter.

(b) The reference. This is typed on the same line as the date, but on the left, and consists of the initials of the person who signs the letter (in this case JAS) and those of the typist (DS). Sometimes other initials or figures are added, according to whatever may suit the filing system of the firm in question. It is usual to quote the re­ference initials of the addressee company in a reply.

(c) The date. The form in which the date is written in this letter — 13
July 1978 — is probably the simplest and clearest of all the current
forms used in the English-speaking world, but there are alternative
ways of writing the date, for example:

July 13 1978 (Americans put the name of the month first),

13th July 1978, and

July 13th 1978.

Some firms still insist on a comma before the year, but others consider this unnecessary. It is important to note that the name of the town or city where the letter originates is not repeated be­fore the date, although this is normally done on the Continent. Another practice widely used in Europe is to write the date in a highly abbreviated form — 12.7.78, for example — but this should not be done in letters written in English, since in Britain 12.7.78 means 12 July 1978, whereas in the USA it means December 7 1978. It is obvious that the use of such forms could result in con­fusion.

(d) The inside address. A few points concerning the name and address
of the firm written to need to be made. Firstly, they are typed on the left, normally against the margin. The diagonal grading of the name and address is rare nowadays, and the style shown in the ex­ample is neater, as well as being quicker for the typist.

Secondly, the use of Messrs, (an abbreviated form of Mes­sieurs, the French word for Gentlemen) should not be used in front of the name of a limited company, nor should it appear with the names of firms which indicate their line of business and do not consist of family names. It follows, therefore, that Messrs, will be used mostly when a partnership is being ad­dressed, as in this example:

Messrs. Hamilton and Jacobs

265 High Holborn

London WC17G

Note also that the number of the street in the address always precedes the name of the street, and that in the case of large towns and cities in the United Kingdom the name of the county is not required. However, when the firm addressed is situated in a smaller town, the county name is neces­sary

(e) The salutation. Below the address a double space at least is left and the words 'Dear Sirs' are typed. This is the usual salutation in Brit­ish business letters addressed to a company rather than to an individual within the company. Very often a comma is typed after the salutation, but an increasing number of firms are eliminating this, considering the spacing to fulfill the function of traditional punc­tuation. In the U.S.A. the most common salu­tation is 'Gentlemen'. Note that the salutation is typed against the left-hand margin.

When writing to an individual within the firm addressed, the salutation is 'Dear Sir' ('Dear Madam' if the recipient is known to be a woman), or “Dear Mr.___”,

“Dear Mrs.____”, “Dear Miss____” or “Dear Ms____” if the addressee is addressed by name rather than by position.

In recent years the use of the form Ms has become quite com­mon. It originated in the U.S.A. and, like its 'male' equivalent Mr.; it does not indicate whether the person addressed is married or unmarried.

(f) The complimentary close. This is typed above the name of the firm sending the letter, then a space is left for the signature. If the salu­tation is “Dear Sirs” or “Dear Sir”, the complimentary close will read “ Yours faithfully ” or, less commonly, “ Yours truly ”. If the cor­respondent is addressed by his or her name — “Dear Mr. Brown”, “Dear Miss James”, etc. — the complimentary close will take the form “ Yours sincerely ”. Avoid closing with old-fashioned phrases such as We remain yours faithfully, Respectfully yours, etc.

(g) The signature.

The name of the person signing the letter is typed below the space left for the signature, and is followed on the next line by his position in the company or by the name of the department he rep­resents. It is, to some extent, a matter of a choice whether you sign with your initial(s) (D. Jenkins) or your given name (David Jenkins), and whether you include a courtesy title (Mr., Mrs., Miss, Ms) in your signature block. But if you give neither your given name nor your title, your correspondent will not be able to identify your sex and may give you the wrong title when he or she replies. It is safer therefore to sign with your given name, and safest of all to include your title.

The term per pro (p.p.) is sometimes used in signatures and means for and on behalf of. Secretaries sometimes use p.p. when signing letters on behalf of their bosses.

Traditionally the complimentary close and signature have been typed in the middle of the page, but it is becoming more and more common for firms to place them against the left-hand margin.

If an enclosure accompanies the letter (e.g. leaflets, prospectuses, bills, certificates, etc.), this fact is indicated both in the text itself and by the word Enclosure (often reduced to Enc. or End.) typed against the left-hand margin some distance below the signature. There are other ways of referring to enclosures — the use of adhesive labels, for instance, or the typing of lines in the left-hand margin beside the reference in the text to the document or documents enclosed — but typing the word Enclosure at the bottom of the letter is by far the most common.

Copies

c.c. (=carbon copies) is written, usually at the end of the letter, when copies are sent to people other then the named recipient.

The subject matter of a letter is often indicated in a subject line which appears below the salutation:

Dear Sirs

Your order no. 6544 of 15 March 2001

Subject lines are not always required, and the date of a letter referred to in the first line of the answer is often sufficient to indicate what the subject is.

Private and confidential

This term may be written at the head of the letter, and more importantly on the envelope, in cases where the letter is intended only for the eyes of the named recipient.